Question

【題目】在生活中有人喜歡運動，也有人不太喜歡運動， 你校就“學校應不應該召開運動會”進行了調查，請根據(jù)以下調查結果寫一篇150詞左右的短文，并簡要發(fā)表你自己的觀點。以下是調查結果：

80%支持	1、增強體質； 2、培養(yǎng)合作精神； 3、學會如何面對勝負；
20%反對	1、并非是強身健體的唯一形式； 2、容易造成傷害； 3、影響學習；
你的看法	（至少兩點理由）……

注意：1. 根據(jù)要點可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；

2. 字數(shù)150左右。文章開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

注：增強體質 build up one’ s strength

Some people like sport while others not in our life. Recently, our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not, students’ opinions are divided on the topic.

Answer 1

【答案】

Some people like sport while others not in our life. Recently, our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not, students’ opinions are divided on the topic.

80﹪of the students think sport does them good. First of all, sport helps them build up their strength, keeping them healthy. In addition, it helps develop students’ ability to cooperate with each other. Plus, students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting, thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.

However, 20﹪of them hold the opposite view, arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy. What’s worse, some of them might get injured in the sports meeting. Besides, taking part in the sports meeting, they think , will have a negative effect on their studies.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s a good choice to hold a sports meeting. For one thing, we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games. For another, it’s a good way of relaxing ourselves, making our school life colorful.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是“Is sport really good for us?”，給出了大部分要點，還要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結構清晰，先是運動的好處；然后指出過度運動的壞處；最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。

【亮點說明】本文屬于正反方觀點作文，但是要點給出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已經詳細說明了。在寫作的時候要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，如First of all，In addition，Plus，What’s worse，Besides，F(xiàn)or one thing，F(xiàn)or another，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和短語，讓文章有變化，有層次，如 does them good，cooperate with，deal with，push themselves hard，hold the opposite view，As far as I’m concerned。在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，要善于使用不同的句型，如thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies. 是非謂語形式，it’s a good choice to hold a sports meeting.it’s a good way of relaxing ourselves，運用了形式主語。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復的表達，對于不會表達的意思要學會替換。