【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

When I was a six -year -old girl, my mother take me on a trip. We went the foot of a high mountain which we would climb. I had never done this before and the thought of them made me happy. But half an hour late, I just stopped and sat on the ground, complete silent. My mother patiently explained, If you try your best, anything are possible. If not, your dreams will never come true. You will never know what beautiful the scenery looks unless you reach for the top of the mountain. Hear her words, I stopped crying and started to climb again. Finally i got to the top of the mountain but enjoyed the splendid view.

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【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者小時(shí)候和母親登山的故事。作者剛開始的時(shí)候興致勃勃，但沒過多久就想要放棄，是因?yàn)槟赣H不斷地鼓勵，最終爬上了山頂。

1. 考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)我還是個六歲的小女孩時(shí)，我媽媽帶我去旅行。分析文章可知，全文使用了一般過去時(shí)，為保持時(shí)態(tài)的一致性，因此需將take改為一般過去時(shí)。故將take改為took。

2. 考查介詞。句意：我們?nèi)サ揭逝赖囊蛔呱降纳侥_下。分析句子可知，go是不及物動詞，常可接帶to的動詞不定式，與go構(gòu)成一個動詞短語，意為“做……某事”，故在went后加to。

3. 考查代詞。句意：我以前從未爬過山，一想到能去爬山我就很高興。分析句子可知，句中this指代是前文提到的“爬山”，thought of后的賓語也應(yīng)指代前文中出現(xiàn)的“爬山”，“爬山”這件事是單數(shù)形式，因此需使用代詞的單數(shù)形式。故將them改為it。

4. 考查形容詞。句意：但半小時(shí)后，我就停下來了，沉默著坐在地上。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)表示“半小時(shí)之后”，late表示“晚的；遲的；最近的”，later表示“更遲的；更后的”，故將late改為later。

5. 考查副詞。句意：但半小時(shí)后，我就停下來了，沉默著坐在地上。分析句子可知，形容詞silent前需用副詞進(jìn)行修飾，故將complete改為completely。

6. 考查be動詞。句意：如果你盡力了，任何事情都是可能的。分析句子可知，不定代詞anything后的謂語動詞需用單數(shù)形式，故將are改為is。

7. 考查連接副詞。句意：除非你到達(dá)山頂，否則你永遠(yuǎn)不知道山頂?shù)娘L(fēng)景有多美。分析句子可知，此句為know后面的賓語從句，根據(jù)句意可知，此處表達(dá)風(fēng)景如何美麗，所以用連接副詞how在句中作狀語，故將what改為how。

8. 考查介詞。句意：除非你到達(dá)山頂，否則你永遠(yuǎn)不知道山頂?shù)娘L(fēng)景有多美。分析句子可知，reach作“到達(dá)；抵達(dá)”之意時(shí)為及物動詞，后可直接接賓語，不需要介詞。故去掉for。

9. 考查非謂語。句意：聽了她說的話，我停止了哭泣并繼續(xù)往上爬。分析句子可知，句中的謂語動詞為stopped and started to…，且主語I與hear之間是邏輯上的主動關(guān)系，因此需使用現(xiàn)在分詞表主動。故將Hear改為Hearing。

10. 考查連詞。句意：最后我還是到了山頂，欣賞到了壯麗的景色。分析句子可知，連詞前后的句子并不存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，“爬到山頂”和“欣賞了景色”這兩個動作接連發(fā)生，因此需使用and來連接兩個動詞和動詞詞組。故將but改為and。

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