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假設(shè)你是Steven,某報(bào)的英語(yǔ)編輯，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)李華所寫(xiě)信的內(nèi)容結(jié)合自己的人生經(jīng)歷用英文寫(xiě)一封回信。字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞左右（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給）。 

I am LiHua, a student in Senior Two now. I will be a Senior Three student next term this year, I am a little nervous and excited about the study of Senior Three. I am wondering whether I can achieve my goal next year. I’d appreciate it if you give me some advice .

Yours,

LiHua

Dear LiHua,

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Yours,

Steven

 

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