Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,于2016年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回國后,發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個行李箱(suitcase)。現(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信,請他們幫你尋找。

信件要點包括:

1.陳述寫信原因

2.簡要描述該行李

3.說明其重要性

4.期待回復(fù)并表示感謝

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.信件格式已為你給出。

3.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a passenger on the flight number BA793 of your airline company. I took the flight from the abroad on June 3,2016. Unfortunately, I found one of my suitcases lost at the airport. Here I am eagerly writing to you for help to find my lost suitcase.

The suitcase is a black mid-sized one, 80 cm long, 40 cm wide and 25 cm thick, with my name tagged on the handle. Because it contains many important personal files and some scientific material and some academic reference books collected when I studied abroad for further research in my field. It took me much time and energy to get them and they are valuable in my scientific study. Besides, there are some presents I bought for my family members and friends, it will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find the suitcase.

Here I sincerely express my appreciation if you could help find the lost suitcase, and I’m looking forward to bearing good news from you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達要求給航空公司寫信，請他們幫助尋找行李箱。書信是同學(xué)們熟悉的寫作體裁，這使得文章的寫作更加容易。在寫作前要確定文章的時態(tài)和人稱，根據(jù)本文要求可以判斷應(yīng)該用第一人稱，主時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時。寫作要點必須至少包括以下要點中的四項：1.陳述寫信原因。2.簡要描述該行李。3.說明其重要性。4.期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。注意在寫作時需用適當(dāng)表示順序的詞來進行上下文的銜接，以增加文章的可讀性和層次性。此外，還要盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式來提高文章檔次。

寫作亮點：范文條理清楚，要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。句式變化多樣，文章生動而流暢，體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：I’m Li Hua, a passenger on the flight number BA793 of your airline company.同位語的使用讓句子清楚明了；The suitcase is a black mid-sized one, 80 cm long, 40 cm wide and 25 cm thick, with my name tagged on the handle.修飾語多樣化，描述具體；Because it contains many important personal files and some scientific material and some academic reference books collected when I studied abroad for further research in my field.原因和時間狀語從句的使用增強了句子的可讀性；Besides, there are some presents I bought for my family members and friends, it will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find the suitcase.使用了高級語法定語從句和狀語從句。