Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天進(jìn)行網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程的內(nèi)容；

2. 對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程的感受。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Knowing that you are interested in my taking online courses during my winter holiday, I'm writing to tell you something about it.

During the winter holiday, my school offered us a wide range of online courses, including Chinese, maths, English and other courses we usually take at school. Every day, I attended lectures according to the time schedule. The best part was that I could replay them if I didn't understand! Meanwhile, there existed some disadvantages. For example, I couldn't communicate with my teachers face to face, and sometimes the Internet got stuck, which would influence my study.

In short, I really appreciate the online courses, which enriched my life in the holiday.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天進(jìn)行網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程的內(nèi)容；2. 對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程的感受。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：be interested in (感興趣)；winter holiday (寒假)；a wide range of (許多各種不同的)；attended lectures (聽(tīng)課)；according to (根據(jù))等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。