Question

10．英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文．假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hotter，and all is quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch them，big drop of rain began to fall．When I came back into house，it was raining harder and harder．I tried very hard to close the window．Then I heard a loudly crashing（碰撞的）sound from the back of the house．When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened：a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇記敘文．文章講述了作者見(jiàn)證的一場(chǎng)大暴風(fēng)雨的故事：上周末午飯后，作者回屋準(zhǔn)備休息，隨后刮起了大風(fēng)，下起了大雨．當(dāng)作者去撿那些被風(fēng)吹走的紙的時(shí)候，他聽到房子后方巨大的碰撞聲，然后發(fā)現(xiàn)倒下的大樹把后門的門頂壓壞了．

解答 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden
                         the                                          suddenly
and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into

my room to have a rest．The air was hotter，and all is quite．
                                                       hot                  was
Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．

Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some

flew out∧the open window．As I ran out to catch them，
            of                                                                                                                                                                                    
big drop of rain began to fall．When I came back into∧house，
     drops                                                         my
it was raining harder and harder．I tried very hard to close the window．

Then I heard a loudly crashing（碰撞的）sound from the back of the house．
                     loud                                                    
When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened：

a big tree had fallen down andbrokethe top of the backroom．
                                           broken                                                                                                                                                                        
1．a(chǎn)→the  考查冠詞．形容詞的最高級(jí)前要用定冠詞the表示．
2．sudden→suddenly  考查副詞．根據(jù)句意，這里修飾動(dòng)詞came要用副詞形式．
3．hotter→hot  考查形容詞．從上下文可知，這里沒(méi)有比較，故不用比較級(jí)．
4．is→was  考查時(shí)態(tài)．  由前面的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last Sunday可知，故事發(fā)生在過(guò)去，要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
5．out后加of  考查介詞的固定搭配．當(dāng)不及物動(dòng)詞后面加賓語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，要先加介詞，根據(jù)后面的the open window可知，該處要用flew out of the open window．
6．drop→drops  考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．drop作名詞表示"水滴"時(shí)，是可數(shù)名詞．雨滴肯定不止一顆，故要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．into后加my  考查代詞．根據(jù)上下文句意可知，這里特指"我的"房子，故要加限定詞my．
8．loudly→loud  考查形容詞的用法．根據(jù)前面的a和后面的crashing sound可知，這里要用形容詞修飾名詞．
9．去掉when  考查連詞．根據(jù)前后的邏輯關(guān)系和后面的冒號(hào)可知，這里不是引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，不需要when．
10．broke  考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)．由and可知，這里是連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．根據(jù)前面的had fallen down可知，時(shí)態(tài)是過(guò)去完成時(shí)，所以要把broke改成broken．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1．不及物動(dòng)詞后面不加賓語(yǔ)，如果要加賓語(yǔ)，必須要先加相應(yīng)介詞，再加賓語(yǔ)．
2．loud和loudly的區(qū)別：loudly只能用作副詞；loud既可作副詞，也可用作形容詞  loud  adv．（與 loudly 同義）"響亮地"、"大聲"或"高聲地"，側(cè)重發(fā)出的音量大，傳得遠(yuǎn)，一般多用來(lái)與speak，talk，laugh，sing 等連用，且必須放在這些動(dòng)詞之后
  loud  adj．"響亮的"、"大聲的"或"高聲的"
  loudly  adv．只用作副詞，"喧鬧地"或"嘈雜地"；"響亮地"，loudly 放在動(dòng)詞前后均可