Question

18．假定你是李華．你的英國朋友Karl暑期將來你所在的城市學習漢語，他來信向你征求課外運動的建議．請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一封回信．
1．建議運動方式；
2．說明理由；
3．表達祝愿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Karl，
I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer．
          ．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書信類作文，要求寫一封建議信，就英國朋友Karl暑期將來你所在的城市學習漢語給出課外運動的建議，雖然要點已經(jīng)給出，但是需要進行適當?shù)臄U展，寫作內(nèi)容包括：建議運動的方式；理由；向他表達祝愿．注意使用連接詞，使作文連貫，注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時，人稱主要用第一人稱．

重要短語：delighted to高興
come to 來到，study Chinese學習中文
as for至于
after school放學后
share with sb和某人分享
easily accessible方便
In addition此外
stay in待在
Best wishes 最美好的祝福

高分句型：
1．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．
whichever 既可以引導名詞性從句也可以引導讓步狀語從句，引導讓步狀語從句時可以轉(zhuǎn)換成no matter which．no matter which 只可以引導讓步狀語從句．
例如：
Either Friday or Monday---choose whichever day is best for you．（名詞性從句）
Whichever party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess．
=No matter which party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess（讓步狀語從句）

2．Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here
動名詞短語做主語，如：Collecting information about children's health is his job．收集有關兒童健康的信息是他的工作．

3．If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．
if 引導條件狀語從句表示某事很可能發(fā)生，條件是可能存在的，主句中某種情況發(fā)生的概率也是很高的．
如：If you ask him，he will help you．如果你請他幫忙，他會幫你的．

解答 Dear Karl，
    I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer． As for taking exercise after school，here I have some suggestions to share with you．（歡迎Karl的到來）
   Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here，（高分句型） and partly because the places for swimming are easily accessible．In addition，climbing is extremely good for your health and time can be scheduled flexibly．So climbing mountains is also not a bad choice．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．（高分句型）（給出建議并說明理由）
   If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．（高分句型） I believe you will have a good time during the stay in China．Best wishes!（表達自己的祝愿）
Yours，
Li hua

點評 這是一篇書信類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來，動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，同時要表達出自己的觀點，可適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱，固定詞組搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，條理清楚，符合邏輯關系．