Question

【題目】請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind"． Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

注意： 1．無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語。

2．除詩歌外，文體不限。

3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學習名稱。

4．詞數(shù)不少于120詞。

Answer 1

【答案】

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life．However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared．I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school．I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public．I could only sing to myself most of the time．Somehow, I wanted to have a try．When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it．With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class．Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help．When I felt I was ready, the day came．Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions．It turned out that I won the first prize ．

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life．If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared．Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇議論文的寫作。闡述機會只給有準備的人，結(jié)合生活中的事例分析原因。注意觀點明確，條理清晰。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)上，注意依據(jù)提示列舉生活中的事例敘述，使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

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