Question

9．假如一家英語報社在征集有關未來生活變化的文章，現(xiàn)請你以"What Will Our Life Be in the Future？"為標題用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于100，內容包括：
生活：足不出戶就可購物、讀書、就醫(yī)等；
旅游：去月球、火星（Mars）等觀光；
環(huán)境：利用太陽能，一個整潔的世界；
健康：鍛煉身體，克服一切疾�。�
注意：（1）標題已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）；
（2）為使文章連貫，可適當增減內容．
What Will Our Life Be in the Future？
                                                                         
                                                                      
                                                                         

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點文．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：未來的生活，旅游，環(huán)境和健康．其次，要以第一人稱來表述．最后要注意時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
be full of 充滿
Cyberspace 信息空間
see a doctor 看醫(yī)生
it is easy for sb to do sth 做某事對某人來說很容易
look forward to 期盼
With the rapid development of science，we are living in a world which is full of chanllengings and opportunies．
句中with短語作伴隨狀語；which引導定語從句修飾名詞world．
What's more，it is very easy for us to go to the space，such as the moon and the Mars．
句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式．
And we will live in a tidier and greener world because the energy we use is all from the sun．
句中because連接原因狀語從句．

解答 With the rapid development of science，we are living in a world which is full of chanllengings and opportunies．（高分句型一） Our world will be changed a lot in every way in the future．（表達看法）
People'life will be quite different，and we will completely live in the cyberspace．We can do many kinds of things on line without going outside，such as shopping，reading books，even seeing a doctor in the hospital and so on．Many illnesses can be cured and many people can live longer with healthy body．Many things can be done by robots．（描述未來的生活）
What's more，it is very easy for us to go to the space，such as the moon and the Mars．（高分句型二） And we will live in a tidier and greener world because the energy we use is all from the sun．（高分句型三）
I am looking forward to living in such a wonderful world and our dream will come true．（表達期盼）

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．