Question

5．假定你是李華，你想邀請留學(xué)生朋友Peter觀看京劇表演，但Peter不在家．請給他寫張留言條，內(nèi)容包括：
1．來訪目的；
2．介紹京劇；
3．另約時(shí)間．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：Beijing Opera 京��；quintessence 精華，精粹；ornate 華麗的
Dear Peter，
I came to see you but you were out．I'd like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week，since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．（高分句型二）The performers in ornate costume perform various stories happened in history to audience by singing，dancing and motions．（高分句型三）I can tell you more about it when we meet．
Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你想邀請留學(xué)生朋友Peter觀看京劇表演，但Peter不在家．請給他寫張留言條，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：來訪目的；介紹京劇；另約時(shí)間．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：With a history of有…的歷史；is considered as 被認(rèn)為是；the quintessence of Chinese culture中國文化的精華；in advance提前；
I'd like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week，since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．（高分句型二）
The performers in ornate costume perform various stories happened in history to audience by singing，dancing and motions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I came to see you but you were out．I'd like to invite you to see Beijing Opera with me next week，since you have always wanted to know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
      With a history of nearly 200 years，Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theatre，which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture．（高分句型二）The performers in ornate costume perform various stories happened in history to audience by singing，dancing and motions．（高分句型三）I can tell you more about it when we meet．
       Please let me know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．