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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文

中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I’m very glad to be invited to an English summer camp.

I prefer to going in July because I’ll have to prepare ourselves for the new school term in August. It seemed that all the activities you offer are attract and meaningful. But after have a discussion with my parents, I’ve decided to attend the English lectures, from them I can get more information on British and American culture. As a large group international people working, living or traveling in our country, communication becomes very important. I hope to teach foreigner Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：我很高興被邀請參加英語夏令營。此處表示特指，故把an---the。

2.固定結構：prefer to do sth.更喜歡做某事，故把going---go。

3.句意：我得為八月份的新學期做準備。根據(jù)句意可知把ourselves---myself。

4.句意：似乎你提到的所有活動都具有吸引力，并有意義。It seems that---，似乎---，根據(jù)句意可知把seemed---seems.

5.be動詞后面用形容詞做表語，故把attract---attractive.

6.句意：和我的父母討論之后。介詞after后面用doing ，故把have---having。

7.此處the English lectures做先行詞，指物，是介詞后面的非限制性定語從句中用，故把them---which.

8.此處可用with的獨立主格結構，把As---With；或As引導時間狀語從句，則在working前加are。

9.固定詞組：a group of大量的---，故在group后面加of。

10.句意：我希望教外國人漢語，傳播漢語文化。根據(jù)句意可知此處用名詞的復數(shù)形式，故把foreigner--- foreigners。