Question

【題目】假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中 共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^ ),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分二

My mother works as doctor in No. 1 People’ s Hospital. She is devoted to her work and treats her patients kind. It’s said that she sometimes pay for the cost of medicine and treatment for some poor patients. Many people praise her for her great virtue or her excellent medical level, she is always busy cared for her patients and often works overtime. Sometimes I can' t see her at home for several day. Once I complained to her because of she hardly had time to accompany myself. She smiles and told me that her patients were most important than our family members.

Answer 1

【答案】1. doctor 前 a

2. kind → kindly

3. pay → pays

4. or →and

5. cared → caring

6. day → days

7.去掉because后的of

8. myself → me

9. smiles → smiled

10. most → more

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者的母親是一名醫(yī)生，對患者非常關(guān)心，由于大部分時間在醫(yī)院，所以沒有太多時間陪家人。

1. 考查冠詞。doctor是可數(shù)名詞，該句的主語是“My mother”，所以此處泛指“一名醫(yī)生”，且doctor的讀音是以輔音音素開頭，所以用不定冠詞a。故在doctor前加a。

2. 考查副詞。分析句子可知，此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾動詞treats。故將kind改為kindly。

3. 考查主謂一致。分析句子可知，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句中主語是she，所以動詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故將pay改為pays。

4. 考查連詞。句意：許多人稱贊她偉大的美德和優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)療水平。分析句子并根據(jù)句意可知，her great virtue和her excellent medical level之間是并列關(guān)系，所以用連詞and。故將or改為and。

5. 考查非謂語動詞。busy doing sth.是固定搭配，意為“忙于做某事”。故將cared改為caring。

6. 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。day是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)前面的several可知，此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將day改為days。

7. 考查連詞。because是從屬連詞,引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，because of是介詞短語,后接名詞(短語)、代詞、動名詞。she hardly had time to accompany myself是一個句子，所以此處應(yīng)用連詞because。故去掉because后的of。

8. 考查代詞。分析句子可知，該句的主語是she，賓語是me，當(dāng)主賓是同一個人時用反身代詞，所以此處應(yīng)用代詞的賓格me。故將myself改為me。

9. 考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)后面的and told可知，此處也用一般過去時與told并列。故將smiles 改為 smiled。

10. 考查形容詞的比較等級。根據(jù)后面的介詞than可知，此處應(yīng)用形容詞的比較級more。故將most 改為 more。