Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

It was 1st January, the first day of the year and a holiday for me. What luck! I decided to withdraw some money from the bank, The bank person, an elderly gentleman with a white beard, replied indifferently as usual to my polite “Happy New Year.” He nodded and I sat in front of him.

Minutes passed but he didn’t raise his head.

Then very hesitantly I put my form and booklet in front of him. He was busy filling up entries in his register. After a few minutes he took my form and from his cabinet he took out a very thick file, from which he started filling in my details, I sat there wondering why we had computerized banking if we were still filling in forms and register.

After waiting for a few more minutes, in which I showed all signs of being impatient, I asked him if my work was done. The moment I said the words, I felt as if a bomb had fallen on him. He shouted, “Nothing is done, it will take time!”

Just then I saw his morning cup of tea which had been lying there for the last ten minutes, untouched. The tea had tuned almost cold while he was doing his work. Suddenly I felt what this man, who had been working at this counter for the last God-knows-how-many years, must be feeling when customers like me come who are always in a hurry to get their work done. We do not even feel the need to thank them for being there, He must be feeling so anxious that “here comes another person who will push me for doing his work first.”

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

Thinking of this, I told him, “Sir, you please hare your tea, I am not in a hurry.”

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Paragraph 2:

What he said really touched my heart.

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Answer 1

【答案】Thinking of this, I told him, “Sir, you please have your tea, I am not in a hurry.” This gentleman, who had worked in the bank for so many years, suddenly looked up at me and for the first time we had eye contact—he had never made eye contact earlier. I saw a different person there. He gave me a rare smile and said, “It is an everyday affair with me; you are not in a hurry but somebody else will come who will be in a hurry.”

What he said really touched my heart. I felt that all this time I thought of him as a robot, someone who was there for my convenience, but today I suddenly felt a strange bond with him. I promised to be more friendly with people who help me with my work and be thankful that they are there for me. In our life, we need to put ourselves in other people’s shoes to imagine their thoughts. In this way, we can understand others better.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。

通過閱讀所給文章可知， 作者在去銀行取錢的時候，遇到銀行一位上了年紀(jì)的白胡子紳士。作者等了幾分鐘感覺不耐煩，然后看到了他早上喝的那杯茶，已經(jīng)放了十分鐘了，一動也不動。于是換位思考了對方的感受。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：想到這里，我對他說:“先生，請您用茶吧，我不趕時間�！�。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述聽到作者的話后，這位在銀行工作了這么多年的先生突然抬頭看著我，我們第一次有了眼神交流——他之前從未有過這樣的交流。第二段開頭是：他的話真的觸動了我的心。接著應(yīng)當(dāng)寫作者的感悟，突然感到與他之間有一種奇怪的紐帶。我承諾對幫助自己工作的人更加友好，并感謝他們一直支持自己。在我們的生活中，我們需要設(shè)身處地為別人著想，想象他們的想法。

續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。