Question

短文改錯(cuò)（滿分10分）文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\）,并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
It was raining. In his way home from school Peter saw an old man walking with difficult in the rain without a umbrella. Peter went up to him and offered share the umbrella with him. The old man in poor health, so Peter tried to hold the umbrella. But he was so short to hold it high enough. While wondered what to do, he saw the old man's stick and had an idea. He had tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made them longer. Now we shared the umbrella. Peter was happy.

Answer 1

【小題1】In—On
【小題2】difficult—difficulty
【小題3】a—an
【小題4】offered后加to
【小題5】man后加was；
【小題6】so---too
【小題7】wondered—wondering
【小題8】去掉had
【小題9】them—it
【小題10】we—they

解析試題分析：
【小題1】on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
【小題2】 with difficulty費(fèi)力地
【小題3】umbrella是元音開頭的單詞，用不定冠詞an
【小題4】offer to do sth主動(dòng)提出做…
【小題5】in poor health是介詞短語，不能做謂語，要加was；
【小題6】這里是too…to…結(jié)構(gòu)
【小題7】while wondering="while" he was wondering
【小題8】tie和make是并列的動(dòng)作，都是過去時(shí)
【小題9】指代：the umbrella用it
【小題10】指代Peter和the old man用they
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。