Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共15分）
根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter” 為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇120-150詞左右的短文。短文須包括以下要點(diǎn)，不得逐條翻譯。

1、簡(jiǎn)單描述漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容；
2、作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重；
3、精講精練；
4、參加體育鍛煉和社會(huì)活動(dòng)。
We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and that a woman is doing some exercise. The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will lose some weight.”
As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we can do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
We do hope that our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more free time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all healthier mentally and physically.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作，做題時(shí)：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫(huà)體現(xiàn)了學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重的問(wèn)題，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個(gè)句子串連起來(lái)。串連時(shí)，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語(yǔ)或過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句，不至于讓讀者覺(jué)得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。