【題目】短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
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Dear John,
Yesterday I had read a notice on the Internet. You wanted to look for a Chinese friend online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.
I'm looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet, I'll try my best to help you for Chinese in my spare time. At same time, I'll introduce some cultures and custom of China to you step by step.
So if you are interesting in this, please let me know your QQ number and I really expect what we can make good friends soon.
Love,
Li Hua

【答案】①had read 刪去had ② actual改為actually ③ or改為and ④be改為 being ⑤our改為 your ⑥for改為 with⑦At和 same中加the ⑧custom改為 customs⑨interesting改為interested ⑩what 改為that


【解析】John希望能夠找一個中國網(wǎng)友學(xué)習(xí)中文，李華寫信給對方希望能夠幫助對方學(xué)習(xí)中文并成為朋友。

（1） had read 刪去had 考查時態(tài)。本句的時間狀語是yesterday，這是一個一般過去時的時間狀語，所以謂語動詞也要使用一般過去時read。本句并沒有體現(xiàn)出過去的過去的含義。

（2）actual改為actually 考查副詞。在英語中副詞通常做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞或動詞，而形容詞通常做表語或定語修飾名詞。本句中使用副詞做狀語修飾動詞短語help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.

（3）or改為and 考查連詞。句意：你想要找一個網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的中國網(wǎng)友，能夠?qū)嶋H幫助你學(xué)習(xí)中國語言、文化和風(fēng)俗。上下文之間含有并列關(guān)系，所以使用并列連詞and連接上下文。

（4）be改為 being 考查動名詞。動詞短語“l(fā)ook forward to期待”中的to是介詞，后面要接名詞或者動名詞做賓語，所以本句中使用動名詞being作為look forward to的賓語。

（5）our改為 your 考查代詞。本句中代詞your指代John。句意：如果我成為你的網(wǎng)上的朋友，我會在空閑時間努力幫助你學(xué)習(xí)漢語。

（6）for改為 with 考查固定搭配。動詞短語help sb with sth幫助某人某事；句意：我會在空閑時間努力幫助你學(xué)習(xí)中文。

（7）At和 same中加the 考查固定短語。介詞短語at the same time與此同時；句意：同時，我會逐步地向你介紹一個中國的文化和風(fēng)俗。

（8） custom改為 customs 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞“custom風(fēng)俗”是一個可數(shù)名詞，本句主語cultures構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系，都使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

（9）interesting改為interested 考查形容詞。形容詞interested感興趣的；通常修飾人。interesting有趣的，通常修飾事物；本句中主語是you，所以使用形容詞interested修飾I。

（10）what 改為that 考查賓語從句。賓語從句we can make good friends soon的結(jié)構(gòu)很完整，不需要使用連接代詞what，因為what要在句中做主語、賓語或者表語等，本句只需要一個連接詞連接起該賓語從句即可。

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