Question

【題目】假如你是王明，將到美國(guó)參加一個(gè)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)，你要在會(huì)上交流自己的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)方法、學(xué)習(xí)收獲、學(xué)習(xí)困難。

注意：

1． 詞數(shù) 100個(gè)左右；

2． 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

In today’s world, being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here, I’d like to share my learning methods.

First, I think it useful to learn grammar and remember as many useful sentence patterns as we can. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class, which helps a lot to improve my English. Besides, TV and radio programs are also of great help.

Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and make more new friends.

However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned. I’d like to use the opportunity to seek for your advice. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇發(fā)言稿，寫(xiě)作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)。不要任意發(fā)揮，畫(huà)蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全。通過(guò)對(duì)眾多提示觀察和分析，獲取與寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來(lái)，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫(xiě)作提綱。 在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語(yǔ)、句型，將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來(lái)。表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識(shí)，避開(kāi)生僻的詞匯，并克服母語(yǔ)的干擾，按照英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，力求做到語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life.是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。which helps a lot to improve my English是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句以及固定結(jié)構(gòu)think it useful to do sth.。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)be of great help, not only…but also, seek for等。以及副詞besides, however的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。