分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息你在新學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)已兩個多月,請根據(jù)下列提示,用英語給你的朋友Jane寫封電子郵件,談一談你的高中生活,寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點(diǎn):介紹你的學(xué)校和班級;你的作息時間;你的同學(xué);你最喜歡的老師…2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):with a long history有有悠久的歷史;get on very well with 與…相處的好;get up起床;take part in參加
My new school is a well-known school with a long history.(高分句型一)
And there are sixty students in my class,who are all hard-working.(高分句型二)
My teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms.Wang,whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Jane,
I've been at Senior High School for more than two months.I'm writing down my thought about my new school life.
My new school is a well-known school with a long history.(高分句型一)There are 50 classes,more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school.The classrooms are amazing.Every room has a computer with a special screen,almost as big as a cinema screen.And there are sixty students in my class,who are all hard-working.(高分句型二) I'm getting on very well with my classmates.Our teachers are very friendly.My favorite subject is English.My teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms.Wang,whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.(高分句型三)She usually tells us something in an interesting way.I don't think I will be bored in her class.
We usually get up at 6:30 and our class starts at 8:00.I always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten.
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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