Question

隨著人類社會(huì)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的動(dòng)植物瀕臨滅絕。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以 “Wildlife Protection”為題為某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的稿件，說(shuō)明如何保護(hù)瀕危野生動(dòng)植物，以紀(jì)念5月22日“世界野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)日”。

原因	1、棲息地破壞     2、食物短缺     3、過(guò)度獵殺     ……
如何保護(hù)	1、保護(hù)環(huán)境       2、建立保護(hù)區(qū)   3、禁止捕殺    ……
呼吁	……

注意：（1）短文要包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. ________

Answer 1

With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. Above all, their habitat is threatened, resulting in a lack of food. Besides, they are being hunted without mercy.
As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too. Second, we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves. As for the government, it should pass laws to prevent endangered animals from being hunted. 
In a word, human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone makes a little contribution, it will make a big difference for wild animals. Let’s take action right now.

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