【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)。并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)詞后劃一橫線并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on. For many years, she was Mum. My mother was a career woman and has her own problems to take care, but when I needed her, she was always there. Her strength came from anywhere, I don't quite know, somewhere very deep. She was so strong that she would never break down, even while I went to her with all my little boy’s annoyed problems and shout at her. Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage to try things other thought were impossible. A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.

【答案】

【1】need 改為needed

【2】she 改為it .

【3】care后加of

【4】anywhere改為somewhere

【5】while改為 when(though/if)

【6】annoyed改為annoying

【7】shout改為shouted

【8】去掉 to.

【9】other 改為others

【10】stronger 改為strong

【解析】

試題分析:本文敘述了在我們的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中,母親所起的巨大作用。無(wú)論何時(shí),我們都可以向她求助。

【1】 need 改為needed 考查語(yǔ)態(tài)。本句中that指代all與need構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以使用過(guò)去分詞needed表示被動(dòng)。

【2】she 改為it . 考查代詞。本句中使用it指代生活中依賴的人。

【3】care后加of 考查固定搭配。動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)take care of照顧...;本句中不定式to take care of作為定語(yǔ)修飾名詞own problems。

【4】anywhere改為somewhere 考查代詞。本句中代詞somewhere某個(gè)地方,表示泛指。母親的力量來(lái)自某個(gè)地方。

【5】while改為 when(though/if) 考查連詞。連詞even though/if即使,盡管,引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句;即使我?guī)е泻⒌哪切┝钊藷⿶赖膯?wèn)題去問(wèn)她的時(shí)候,她一直很堅(jiān)強(qiáng)從未崩潰。也可以改為when,連詞when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,意為“甚至當(dāng)我?guī)е钊藷⿶赖膯?wèn)題去問(wèn)她的時(shí)候......”

【6】annoyed改為annoying 考查形容詞。形容詞annoyed通常修飾人,annoying通常修飾事物。本句中使用annoying修飾名詞problems。

【7】shout改為shouted 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句的謂語(yǔ)由兩個(gè)并列部分“went to her with all my little boy’s annoyed problems”和“and shout at her”組成,都應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去式。

【8】去掉 to. 考查動(dòng)詞。本句中動(dòng)詞give是及物動(dòng)詞,后面直接加雙賓語(yǔ),形成短語(yǔ)give sb sth給某人某物;原文轉(zhuǎn)換的to是多余的。

【9】other 改為others 考查代詞。本句中含有定語(yǔ)從句other thought were impossible,修飾先行詞things,定語(yǔ)從句中others thought是主句,形容詞other不能做主語(yǔ),要使用代詞others在句中做主語(yǔ)。

【10】stronger 改為strong 考查形容詞原級(jí)。本句中并未涉及到比較,所以使用原級(jí)strong即可。

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