8．Here is my idea about how a friend is like．Firstly，（76）將how改成what
a friend is someone you can share your secrets．If you            （77）在secets后加with
tell him a secret，never will he talks about it with anybody       （78）將talks改成talk
else．Besides，a friend is always good listener when you         （79）在good前加a
need one．After hear your sad stories，he will say some           （80）將hear改成hearing
words that is nice and warm．Still，your happiness makes         （81）將is改成are
him happily too．What's more，a good friend is willing to      （82）將happily改成happy
offer the help to which you need，or can at least give you         （83）去掉to
some advices．In a word，friends are those you like and           （84）將advices改成advice
trust，and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with        （85）將spent改成spend
them．

分析 文章介紹了作者對(duì)于朋友的理解．
這是我關(guān)于朋友是什么的想法．首先，朋友是你可以分享秘密的人．如果你告訴他秘密，他不可能和別人談?wù)摚浯�，一個(gè)好朋友總是個(gè)很好的傾聽(tīng)者．聽(tīng)完后，他總會(huì)說(shuō)一些暖心的話，讓你很開(kāi)心舒服．因?yàn)槟愕目鞓?lè)也會(huì)讓他快樂(lè)．而且，一個(gè)朋友在你需要的時(shí)候是愿意提供幫助的，或者至少能給你一些建議．總之，朋友是你喜歡和信任的人，是你想每分鐘都和他呆在一起的人．

解答 76．將how改成what．介詞about后是由what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中l(wèi)ike缺賓語(yǔ)． 因此要用連接代詞what．
77．在secrets后∧with．這里someone是先行詞，someone之后是定語(yǔ)從句，省略關(guān)系代詞that，從句中固定短語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)"share sth．with sb"缺少介詞with，因此添加with．
78．將talks改成talk．"never will he talks about"if從句中是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主句應(yīng)該用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，主句中將never置于句首構(gòu)成部分倒裝，助動(dòng)詞will后須用動(dòng)詞原形，因此用talk．
79．在always之后加∧a．listener是可數(shù)名詞，且是泛指，因此要添加a．
80．將hear改成hearing．a(chǎn)fter是介詞，后接名詞或動(dòng)詞-ing形式，因此要用動(dòng)名詞hearing．
81．將is改成are．這里words是先行詞，"that is nice and warm"是定語(yǔ)從句，從句中關(guān)系代詞that是主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)于先行詞words保持一致，因此應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式are．
82．將happily該成happy．這里是固定結(jié)構(gòu)"make+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)"，"make him happy"用形容詞充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)．因此用happy．
83．去掉to．"offer the help to which you need"中the help是先行詞，"which you need"是定語(yǔ)從句，從句中關(guān)系代詞做謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞need的賓語(yǔ)，因此to多余，要去掉．
84．將advices改成advice．a(chǎn)dvice是不可數(shù)名詞，無(wú)復(fù)數(shù)形式．因此用advice．
85．將spent改成spend．"you will enjoy very minute that you spent with them"中"every minute"是先行詞，"that you spent with them"是定語(yǔ)從句，從句中關(guān)系代詞作謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞spend的賓語(yǔ)，前句中用的是一般將來(lái)時(shí)"will enjoy"，因此定語(yǔ)從句中要保持時(shí)態(tài)須一致，需要一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)spend．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是著重考查學(xué)生知識(shí)和能力的綜合性測(cè)試題型，涉及詞匯、語(yǔ)法、句型結(jié)構(gòu)等方面的知識(shí)與邏輯情理的推斷和綜合辨析能力．解答這類題目，首先瀏覽全文，掌握大意，然后逐句分析句法、語(yǔ)法、行文邏輯方面是否有誤，改錯(cuò)時(shí)最好從最簡(jiǎn)單最熟悉的項(xiàng)目入手，比如先從語(yǔ)法角度入手，再?gòu)倪壿嫹矫婵紤]，最后推敲難題．改好后最后反復(fù)瀏覽核對(duì)改后的全文，看全篇是否語(yǔ)義通順．

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