Question

【題目】請修改下面這篇短文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除和修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Stephen Hawking, the brilliant figure in the modern history of physics, passed away on March 14. He is famous for his work on black holes or relativity. Although he was not able to speak or write, but he published many best-sellers on science, included A Brief History of Time. We admire him not only for that he did, bit also for his positive attitude towards life. He even appears in several films and sitcoms as a humorous man. Hawking was great. His dead made many people sad and they said they would learn him. All of us should try his best to live more meaningful.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文主要講了科學巨匠霍金的去世，令許多人感到悲傷。

考查冠詞。泛指“一位杰出的人物”，且brilliant首字母發(fā)音是輔音，所以用不定冠詞a，the改成a。

考查連詞。“黑洞”和“相對論”之間是并列關系，所以or改成and。

考查固定用法。Although與but不能連用，所以刪除but。

考查included與including 用法的區(qū)別。included 是過去分詞形式的形容詞，在表示“包括……在內”時常放在被修飾的名詞或代詞之后，起著補充說明的作用，including 是現(xiàn)在分詞，在許多情況下用作介詞，后面直接接賓語，含有補充說明之意，所以included改成including。

考查賓語從句。what he did作介詞for的賓語，所以what he did是一個賓語從句，引導詞在從句中作did的賓語，所以that改成what。

考查時態(tài)。表示發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時，所以appears改成appeared。

考查名詞。作句子主語用名詞，所以dead改成death。

考查固定短語。句意為他們說他們將向他學習。learn from向…學習，是固定短語，所以learn后加from。

考查代詞。我們所有人都應該盡我們最大的努力生活的更有意義。表示“盡我們最大的努力”，所以his改成our。

考查副詞。修飾動詞live，用副詞，所以meaningful改成meaningfully。