Question

【題目】假如你是李華,最近你所在的城市設(shè)立了“漢字書寫日”。你的美國(guó)筆友John對(duì)此很感興趣，寫信向你詢問(wèn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回一封信。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)設(shè)立原因：人們提筆忘字，寫漢字機(jī)會(huì)減少;

(2)日期：9月28日，孔子誕辰;

(3)活動(dòng)：書法競(jìng)賽及展覽等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

2.可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：漢字 character，孔子 Confucius，書法 calligraphy

Dear John,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is everything going? I am writing to tell you something about Chinese Character Writing Day in our city.

With the popularity of mobile phones, computers and the Internet, many people have few opportunities to write in daily life. Consequently, people tend to forget how to write Chinese characters when they have to. Therefore, a special day is needed to arouse people's interest in Chinese characters and encourage people to write them more often. Moreover, it is a good way to keep our traditional culture alive.

Now September 28th is chosen as Chinese Character Writing Day, for it is the birthday of Confucius. Various activities will be held that day, such as handwriting contests and exhibitions of calligraphy, through which people can enjoy the beauty of the Chinese character and experience a culture of amazing depth and variety as well.

You are welcome to join us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信，假如你是李華,最近你所在的城市設(shè)立了“漢字書寫日”。你的美國(guó)筆友John對(duì)此很感興趣，寫信向你詢問(wèn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回一封信。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：popularity普及，opportunities機(jī)會(huì)，daily life日常生活，Consequently因此，tend to傾向于，arouse引起，encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事，traditional culture傳統(tǒng)文化，Various各種各樣的。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如：Various activities will be held that day, such as handwriting contests and exhibitions of calligraphy, through which people can enjoy the beauty of the Chinese character and experience a culture of amazing depth and variety as well.

定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用；Moreover, it is a good way to keep our traditional culture alive.不定式是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式結(jié)構(gòu)。本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。