Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)共享汽車情況的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Numbers of Shared Cars in China and Tendency

Car-sharing is catching on

Car-sharing is a new concept. Previously, car ownership helped to develop China’s economy and its cities. But now people have found that it has led to traffic jams and other challenges to the environment and economy. Conversely, car sharing serves as a model to provide car access without the requirement of ownership.

Unlike traditional car-rentals over the counter, car-sharing refers to services where users can gain access to vehicles, often by the hour, online. The cars are usually parked at designated parking lots, where drivers can get to and return them. More than 40 companies in China currently offer car-sharing services, while most cars are new energy vehicles.

China’s Ministry of Transport has recently voiced its support for the development of the car-sharing industry.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勍茝V共享汽車的益處（上述文字僅供參考）；

3. 就如何促進(jìn)共享汽車的健康發(fā)展提兩條建議。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)

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Answer 1

【答案】As we can see from the diagram, in 2016,China only possessed 28,000 shared cars. It is predicted that the number will continue to rise and by 2020, as many as 300,000 such cars will be put onto the market.

Accelerating the development of car-sharing industry does have its own advantages. Not only does it provide an alternative for people to get around but it will also help to shrink the ever increasing scale of private cars. Thus, car-sharing service does its part to ease urban traffic and reduce air pollution.

As to how to achieve a sustainable development for car-sharing service, here are some suggestions. On the one hand, the government should strengthen its guidance and monitoring. On the other hand, enterprises themselves should improve their online and offline service abilities, such as ensuring the safety of customers’ private information and building more parking lots and charging posts.

【解析】試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇圖表寫作。本書面表達(dá)的要求考生首先用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容，然后再給出自己的評(píng)判。認(rèn)真閱讀有關(guān)我國(guó)共享汽車情況的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，談?wù)勍茝V共享汽車的益處，并就如何促進(jìn)共享汽車的健康發(fā)展提兩條建議。

首先，概括部分考查了學(xué)生的概括能力，學(xué)生再概括的時(shí)候要注意語(yǔ)言的精煉性，要點(diǎn)要齊全。其次，闡述的理由或論據(jù)要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，層次分明。最后， 對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)要作出總結(jié)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇圖表作文。文章能較好地反映圖表要表達(dá)的用意，語(yǔ)言流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文中使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。As we can see from the diagram, in 2016,China only possessed 28,000 shared cars句中as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；It is predicted that the number will continue to rise and by 2020,主語(yǔ)從句做真正的主語(yǔ)；Accelerating the development of car-sharing industry does have its own advantages動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，句中強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)運(yùn)用巧妙；Not only does it provide an alternative for people to get around but it will also help to shrink the ever increasing scale of private cars.部分倒裝堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，as many as，Thus, As to，On the one hand, On the other hand,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。