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12．【作文題目】假如你是九校中學高二學生李華，請給你的朋友Charles寫一封信，告訴他你即將參加學校英語聽力競賽（English listening contest），內容包括：
　　1．競賽時間；
　　2．你此時的心情；
　　3．你的希望（成績，所得）．
注意：
　　1．詞數(shù)120左右；
　　2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
　　3．開頭和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Charles，
　　How are you these days？________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給你的朋友Charles寫一封信，告訴他你即將參加學校英語聽力競賽（English listening contest），寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：競賽時間；你此時的心情；你的希望（成績，所得）． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As we all know眾所周知；on behalf of代表；To be honest誠實的說；At the same time同時；not only，but also不僅，而且；
As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）
It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）
What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charles，
      How are you these days？I am writing this letter to tell you something about a contest in our school．
　　As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）
　　To be honest，I do feel nervous more or less，fearing that I can't get a satisfying prize and that I will let my classmates down．At the same time，I am quite excited，because only by challenging ourselves from time to time can we make progress all around．I hope I can make it，not only bringing honor to our class but also improving myself．（高分句型四） God bless me．
　　I believe you will give me your best wishes though you are not around，won't you？
　　Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．