Question

5．每年的10月31日是聯(lián)合國(guó)確定的"世界勤儉日"．假設(shè)你是李華，你最近給你在美國(guó)的朋友Mike的一封e-mail中專門(mén)討論了"勤儉"的問(wèn)題．你的e-mail內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1）指出校園內(nèi)中學(xué)生花錢(qián)如水，沒(méi)有節(jié)約的概念．
2）分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因（獨(dú)生子女；生活水平的提高；追求時(shí)髦）
3）你對(duì)"節(jié)儉"的看法．
注意：
1、字?jǐn)?shù)：110左右．
2、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
3、參考詞匯：世界勤儉日：World Thrift Day； 花銷：expenditure； 現(xiàn)象：phenomenon； 奢侈：extravagance（這個(gè)提示不要為好，范文中并未用到，有了反而增加了難度）
Dear Mike，
    How's everything going？
As you know，World Thrift Day falls on October 31．So this time I'd like to discuss thrift with you．In recent years，the monthly expenditure of middle school students has been on the sharp rise．                                          ．
How about your point about thrift？
Best wishes!
Yours faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇為電子郵件．主題為："勤儉"的問(wèn)題．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)為：1）指出校園內(nèi)中學(xué)生花錢(qián)如水，沒(méi)有節(jié)約的概念．
2）分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因（獨(dú)生子女；生活水平的提高；追求時(shí)髦）
3）你對(duì)"節(jié)儉"的看法．

解答 Dear Mike，
    How's everything going？
    As you know，World Thrift Day falls on October 31．So this time I'd like to discuss thrift with you．In recent years，the monthly expenditure of middle school students has been on the sharp rise． Many of them spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their minds．This phenomenon is caused by the following factors．
    First of all，nowadays most of students are the only children of their families．Naturally they get more care and pocket money．Secondly，with the improvement of living standard，parents can afford higher expenditure of their children．Thirdly，some students like to pursue fashion and trends，which tends to need more money．
    From my point of view，middle students should learn to be thrifty．We should limit our expenditure in our daily life．The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development．
How about your point about thrift？
Best wishes!
Yours faithfully
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需熟悉書(shū)信格式．考生需了解寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及寫(xiě)作意圖，合理安排寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．