Question

3．你將向學校的英語網站投稿介紹年度熱詞"自拍照"（selfie）．
寫作內容
請根據以下內容，寫一篇關于自拍照的介紹．
定義：人們給自己拍的照片，通常用手機拍攝并分享到互聯網上．
起源：2002年，一位澳大利亞人在某論壇上傳了一張自己 的照片，并把照片稱為"selfie"．
現狀：（1）"selfie"以及自拍行為越來越流行；
 （2）牛津詞典把"selfie"列為"2013年度詞匯"．
評論：（1）自拍表達人類希望分享的需求，促進溝通；
（2）自拍讓人過于在意自己的外貌，忽視內在美．
參考詞匯：論壇 forum        牛津Oxford
寫作要求
只能使用5個句子表達全部內容．
評分標準
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫．
定義]A"selfie"is a photo taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．[起源]The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．[現狀]Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．[評論]Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹selfie的提綱類作文，內容要點包括：定義；起源；現狀以及評論．
高級詞匯、短語和高分句型：
accompany 動詞，伴隨，陪伴；
popularity 名詞，流行，受歡迎；
attach too much importance to  認為…有重要性；
高分句型（一）
A"selfie"is a phototaken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．
taken和 shared 兩個過去分詞在句子里做后置定語修飾 a photo，表示被動；
高分句型（二）
The word ①was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．
①用了被動語態(tài)；
②who引導定語從句

解答 A"selfie"is a photo①taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．（定義） The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．（起源） Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．（現狀） Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．（評論）However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．

點評 這是一篇提綱類的文章，有一定難度．考生在寫作時，首先要涵蓋所有要點；其次，不能簡單翻譯句子，要使用一些高級詞匯和句式來表達．要求考生在平時學習中擴大詞匯量以及儲備一定量的高級句式．