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6．假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為"What to learn in senior high school？"的英語沙龍活動(dòng)，特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會(huì)．請根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿．
1．學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等；
2．學(xué)會(huì)做人：真誠，友善；
3．其他方面：考生自擬．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school．In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．
In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文---寫一發(fā)言稿，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語：challenging （有挑戰(zhàn)性的），efficiently （有效地），achieve academic goals （實(shí)現(xiàn)學(xué)術(shù)目標(biāo)），develop a good habit （養(yǎng)成好的習(xí)慣），benefit sb（對(duì)某人有利），get involved in（牽扯到，卷入，涉及…..），get along well with（與…..相處融洽）．

解答 One possible version
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．
       In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．【高分句型】It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．（學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)）
       In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．（學(xué)會(huì)做人）
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．（其他方面）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．