Question

20．英國Warwickshire學(xué)校將組織學(xué)生來你校交流學(xué)習(xí)中文．經(jīng)安排，Tracy 住在你家．假設(shè)你是李華，請你給Tracy寫封電子郵件，介紹她來中國后的有關(guān)事宜，信的要點(diǎn)如下：
★表達(dá)歡迎；
★生活安排：食宿，交通；
★漢語學(xué)習(xí)：每周一至周五，每天四節(jié)課；
★課外活動：文體活動，社會 實(shí)踐活動．
要求：100字左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息英國Warwickshire學(xué)校將組織學(xué)生來你校交流學(xué)習(xí)中文．經(jīng)安排，Tracy 住在你家．假設(shè)你是李華，請你給Tracy寫封電子郵件，介紹她來中國后的有關(guān)事宜，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)歡迎；★生活安排：食宿，交通；★漢語學(xué)習(xí)：每周一至周五，每天四節(jié)課；★課外活動：文體活動，社會 實(shí)踐活動． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be delighted to 高興地去做；arrange for為…安排；As to 至于，關(guān)于；including包含，包括； In addition另外，places of interest名勝古跡；Look forward to盼望；
Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）
As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tracy，
       I'm Li Hua．I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to stay with my family while you're in my school．
       Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）During your stay here，we'll provide you with a room of your own with furniture，a TV and a bathroom．Our school is three blocks from my home，so we can cycle to school every day．Lunch is served at the school canteen．A wide variety of Chinese food is to cater to your taste．As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
       In addition，you will enjoy colorful school activities in the afternoon．You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming．Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）If you have further questions，do let me know．Looking forward to your reply．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．