【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim即將來京，并打算 利用周末時間游覽一處北京古代建筑。他發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的推薦；2.說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.

The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing and it’s easy to go there by bus. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes. It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics. I’m sure you will be amazed at the wonderful place.

Finally, I do hope that you will have a good time in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向朋友介紹一處北京古代建筑。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表明推薦的地方

2.推薦理由

1）介紹位置。（location）

2）自然風(fēng)光。（natural scenery）

3）文化歷史意義。（cultural and historical meaning）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be pleased to; recommend; be located in; beautifully; be composed of; largest; the center of; have a good time

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing.

2. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.

3. The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing.

4. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes.

5. It is the largest garden in China.

6. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics.

7. I do hope that you will have a good time in China..

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改

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