Question

15．Many Chinese students have studied English for approximately ten years，but most of them cannot even speak English correctly or fluently．In my opinion，there are several obstacles that have caused this to happen．The main obstacle is fear!Another is the habit of mentally translating from Chinese to English and then to change these thoughts into spoken words and sentences．Many of these difficulties are caused by the way Chinese people study and learn the language．
We must learn to speak as a child does．When we are learning a second language we need to remember how we learned our native language．Learning to understand and speak a language is one of the first skills a child develops．How does a child learn the language？He listens for a time and then he tries to repeat the words．Parents give great praise for the smallest effort and slightest improvement．Therefore，the child develops courage and is excited about learning．It takes a long time before he knows anything about grammar，spelling or formal sentence structures．
As for language teachers，they should avoid criticism and be very encouraging and generous with praise．Criticism or pointing out faults too often causes students to lose self-confidence and develop a fear of speaking．The best way to motivate a student is using praise．
The most important aspect of speaking is having good self-esteem．Self-esteem is how you feel about yourself．When most Chinese people are asked how their English is，or they are told their English is very good，they immediately respond by saying，"Oh my English is very poor．"If you say this to yourself often enough，you will believe it．When someone compliments（稱贊）you，just say"thank you"．
Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning．（要點1）Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot．（要點2）And teachers should praise and encourage rather than criticize students，just as parents do．（要點3）Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English..（要點4）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning
他們的恐懼和學習方式造成的，很多中國學生不能流利地說英語，即使經過十年的學習．
高分句型二：
Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English．
最后，擁有良好的自尊對于講英語是十分重要的．

解答 Caused by their fear and way of learning，many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years'learning（高分句型一）．（要點1）Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot．（要點2）And teachers should praise and encourage rather than criticize students，just as parents do．（要點3）Finally，having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English（高分句型二）..（要點4）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．