Question

【題目】請你根據(jù)對下圖的理解，用英語寫一篇短文。你的短文應包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 簡單描述圖片內(nèi)容；

2. 談談你的理解和想法；

3. 舉例說明理由。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)：150詞左右;

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù);

3. 參考詞匯：fertilizer n. 肥料

Haste Makes Waste

As we all know, there goes an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Haste Makes Waste

As we all know, there is an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”. As is vividly shown in the picture, the couple get astonished when seeing their crops withering/ dead. The husband can’t help losing his temper, scolding his wife for her improper way of farming, while the wife argues that she simply wants the crops to grow faster by fertilizing more. She never thought too many fertilizers would cause the crops to die.

The picture clearly conveys a message that if people are eager to finish a task in a hurry, the outcome may be less satisfactory and even goes to the opposite. As is often the case, we can’t take every detail into consideration before a quick decision is made. Under such circumstances we attach too much importance to quick speed at the expense of high quality, which eventually contributes to greater losses. Additionally, more unexpected accidents may take place when we are in a hurry.

Remembering English words is a good case in point. If you set a goal of reciting 50 words within a short time, the result may let you down, for you forget them easily. However, if you slow down a little bit, for example, divide the words into several parts, one part at a time and go over them frequently, they can be kept longer and more easily in mind. Comparing the two methods, we find the latter is more efficient.

In conclusion, haste makes waste. If we can apply it to our daily life, we are bound to make progress.

【解析】

試題分析：江蘇這幾年高考都是任務型讀寫，本文屬于看圖作文，考生首先要讀懂原圖：拔苗助長，欲速則不達。在寫作時，首先要描述圖的內(nèi)容，第二段敘述該圖表達的含義，談談自己的理解和想法：也就是按照事物發(fā)展的順序正常發(fā)展，不能拔苗助長。最后以身邊或者聽說的事例證明這種做法是錯誤的。

【亮點說明】范文有諸多亮點，范文脈絡很清晰，很有條理性。高級句式運用很到位，如：定語從句As we all know,，同位語從句The picture clearly conveys a message that if people are eager to finish a task in a hurry, the outcome may be less satisfactory and even goes to the opposite.高級的詞匯也很到位，如take …into consideration，efficient，apply…to…。高級句式和詞匯的使用讓文章很有特色。