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Hello, everyone! Today I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three.

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【答案】Hello, everyone! Today I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three. What impresses us is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates. In addition, it is his politeness and great help to others that make him get along well with every classmate. He is always ready to offer help to those who have problems with schoolwork or daily life. Moreover, his optimism and hard work also inspire his classmates.

Last month, I felt terribly depressed due to my bad grades in the monthly examination. He helped me analyze my weaknesses and strengths in all subjects and recommended some useful reference books to me. His encouragement cheered me up and built up my confidence again.

Words fail to describe how helpful and kind he is! He has his own ambition that he wants to be a doctor one day so that he can help more patients in need.

【解析】本文章通過(guò)具體事例，采用了多種句式塑造了一個(gè)思想品質(zhì)好，愛(ài)助人的個(gè)性鮮明，有血有肉的學(xué)生形象－江明。本篇文章重點(diǎn)突出，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，條理清晰。

亮點(diǎn)：

（1）在文章中使用了很多復(fù)雜句。可見(jiàn)駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力非常強(qiáng)。

復(fù)雜句1如：What impresses us is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates。

這個(gè)復(fù)雜句中既有what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，又有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，在表語(yǔ)從句中又有一個(gè)由whenever狀語(yǔ)從句非謂語(yǔ)。

What impresses us is that... 是what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句 ；由that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句是：….is that he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates；whenever引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句是he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates。

復(fù)雜句2：He has his own ambition that he wants to be a doctor one day so that he can help more patients in need.其中有一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句e has his own ambition that he…和一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從從句…so that he can help more patients in need。

（2）很好地使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。it is his politeness and great help to others that make him get along well with every classmate.

（3）使用了幾處并列句和復(fù)合句。

定語(yǔ)從句1：I am to introduce another Civilized Student, whose name is Jiang Ming, from Class Three.

定語(yǔ)從句2：He is always ready to offer help to those who have problems with schoolwork or daily life

（4）感嘆句。

Words fail to describe how helpful and kind he is!

（5）非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。如：he always wears a merry smile whenever greeting teachers or classmates

（6）使用了許多連接詞和許多高級(jí)詞匯。如：In addition， Moreover，get along well with terribly depressed，analyze my weaknesses and strengths等。。使的文章邏輯清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，如流水一般，一氣呵成。

總之這是一篇不可多得的上上乘作品，很值得同學(xué)們借鑒學(xué)習(xí)！

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