Question

13．請閱讀下面短文和表格，并按照要求用英語寫一篇 150詞左右的文章．
（1）In its early years，F(xiàn)acebook consisted entirely of college students．In 2005，despite much protest（異議），the founder Mark Zuckerberg decided to open Facebook to high school students．The strategy change has worked．Facebook has become the most popular online social networking service．
（2）Blockbuster，a video-rental chain，survived the transition from VHS to DVD just fine-but then failed to adapt to the next big change．Blockbuster remained flat-footed（無準(zhǔn)備的）when Netflix started sending video through the mail and cable and phone companies started offering video-on-demand．The firm is now chasing its industry instead of leading it．
（3）Data shows that initiatives with excellent change management are six time more likely to meet objectives than those with poor change management．By simply moving from"poor"to"fair"，change management increases the likelihood of meeting objectives by the three fold．Change management，when applied effectively on a project，significantly increases the success rate of the effort．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析成功者與失敗者對"改變"所持的態(tài)度；
3．談?wù)勀銓?改變"的認(rèn)識（不少于兩點）．
[寫作要求]
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連續(xù)，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
The descriptions and the graph show us that change is both a survival skill and s success skill．If you don't change and move forward，you'll be left behind．
One of thelargestgaps that exist betweensuccessful people and unsuccessfulones is how they respond to change．Successful peopleview it as an opportunity for growth．However，unsuccessful people tend to view change in a negative light．They struggle with fear，in this case an emotion based on thefalse belief that something bad of uncomfortable is going to result from change．This is the reason for theirdecision to stop change from happening entirely．
I feel changing is one of the hardest things a person can do．With the world moving so fast and technology advancing faster than ever，we need to welcome what's coming and adapt，rather than fear it，deny it or hide from it．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
They struggle with fear，in this case an emotion based on the false belief that something bad of uncomfortable is going to result from change
他們掙扎與恐懼，在這種情況下，基于壞事不舒服會導(dǎo)致的變化虛假的信仰情感．
高分句型二：
With the world moving so fast and technology advancing faster than ever，we need to welcome what's coming and adapt，rather than fear it，deny it or hide from it．
隨著世界的飛速發(fā)展和科技的進步，我們需要迎接即將到來的改變，而不是害怕它，否認(rèn)它或逃避它．．

解答 The descriptions and the graph show us that change is both a survival skill and s success skill．If you don't change and move forward，you'll be left behind（概括）．
One of the largest gaps that exist between successful people and unsuccessful ones is how they respond to change．Successful people view it as an opportunity for growth．However，unsuccessful people tend to view change in a negative light．They struggle with fear，in this case an emotion based on the false belief that something bad of uncomfortable is going to result from change（高分句型一）．This is the reason for their decision to stop change from happening entirely．
I feel changing is one of the hardest things a person can do．With the world moving so fast and technology advancing faster than ever，we need to welcome what's coming and adapt，rather than fear it，deny it or hide from it（高分句型二）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．