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1．Teenagers雜志Conversation With Brad欄目的負(fù)責(zé)人Brad收到了李華的一封來信．仔細(xì)閱讀下面的來信，幫助Brad用英語寫一封回信，給出分析并提出合理建議．
Dear Brad，
I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School．I have some difficulty communicating with my parents．Although I have tried my best，I find it really difficult to make them satisfied…So I feel lonely sometimes．I would be grateful if you could give me some advice．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
2．詞數(shù)：120-150．
Dear Li Hua，
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給李華寫一封信．幫他分析信中所提及的與父母交流困難的問題并提出合理的建議．
寫作時人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭； 2．分析與父母交流困難這一問題；3．給出合理建議；4．結(jié)尾-總結(jié)．
重要短語：be honored to do （很榮幸地做某事），have trouble doing sth（做某事有困難），communicate with（與…交流），lie in（在于），as for（關(guān)于），share sth
with sb（與某人分享某物），convince sb （讓某人信服），It's one's fault（是某人的錯），place high expectations on sb（對某人期望高），be satisfied with（對…滿意），as long as（只要），live up to（符合，不辜負(fù)），more than（超過，多于），heal sth（治愈某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．
此處為時間狀語從句中的省略，結(jié)構(gòu)為"連詞when+現(xiàn)在分詞"，可以理解為時間狀語從句"when you have trouble communicating with your parents"．
【高分句型二】
2．Therefore，it's a common problem shared by many，①whose cause lies in②what we call"generation gap"．
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"whose+名詞"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"a common problem"．
②此處為連接代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，"what"在從句中作賓語．
【高分句型三】
3．I believe they will be satisfied with you①as long as they know you have tried ②whatever you can to live up to their standard．
①此處是由連詞"as long as"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句為"I believe they will be satisfied with you"．
③此處是由連接代詞"whatever"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，連接代詞"whatever"在從句中作"can"后省略的動詞"do"的賓語．
【高分句型四】
4．Whatever you are，they will always be there for you．
     此處是由連接代詞"whatever"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，"whatever"在從句中作表語．

解答 Dear Li Hua，?
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．（開頭）?
I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．【高分句型一】Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence．Therefore，it's a common problem shared by many，whose cause lies in what we call"generation gap"．【高分句型二】?（分析）
As for my advice for you，first，don't hide your feelings．You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents．Second，convince them you have tried your best．It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child．I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard．【高分句型三】?（建議）
Anyway，there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world．【高分句型一】Whatever you are，they will always be there for you．【高分句型四】Love them，and love can heal everything．（結(jié)尾-總結(jié)）?
Yours sincerely，
Brad

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．