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第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their

children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly

any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many

children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people

already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents?

Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.

 

【答案】

Most families in China hoped (hope)  their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in (with) their children. So do (are) teachers in schools! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time^ (to) have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to  (刪除to)study. No wonder such （so） many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his （their）parents and teachers! I believe many people^(加have) already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw ^(加a)lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making (carrying)out a plan to solve the education problems.

【解析】略

 

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