Question

假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary School set up in 1960. In the past fifty years, Elite had experienced a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of extra-curricular activities for them to choose. We try to provide as much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in

charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our

1.aspects

school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary

School▽ set up in 1960. In the past forty years, Elite had experienced

2.was                                 3.has

a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to

Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now

4. 去掉the

was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three

5.is

libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for

6.to

laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a

7.we

Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have

an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of

8.wide

extra-curricular activities for them to choose▽. We try to provide as

9.加from

much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is

10.many

committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.

【解析】

 前面有various修飾，故應(yīng)將aspect改為aspects.

 學(xué)校是被建立的，故應(yīng)用被動(dòng)，加was.

 根據(jù)前面的In the past forty years，可知應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故had改為has.

 space空間，不可數(shù)名詞。這里沒有特指什么空間，故無需加the.

 因?yàn)橛袝r(shí)間狀語now，故應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

 be available to固定短語。

 根據(jù)前面We even have three libraries，可知，這是第一人稱。

 wide可以做形容詞，而widely是副詞，故用wide.

 有很多課外活動(dòng)可供選擇，故不是之間choose activities, 而是choose from activities.

 activities是復(fù)數(shù)形式，不能贏Much修飾。