【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Knowing that our library is going to buy more books, I’d like to give some advices.

What we need most are popular science books, that usually explain basic principles of the nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arousing our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is how I recommend another category of books: literary books. These classic works, writing by great masters , present noble thoughts through fascinating stories and beautifully language. It not only provide us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

I would appreciate this if you could consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】advices改為advice

【2】that改為which

【3】去掉the

【4】arousing改為arouse

【5】how改為why

【6】writing改為written

【7】beautifully改為beautiful

【8】It改為They

【9】us后面加with

【10】this改為it

【解析】

試題分析：本文中作者給出了一些圖書館購書的建議，并解釋了為什么建議購買這些書的原因。

【1】advices改為advice 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞advice建議，是一個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。建議：知道圖書館要買更多的書，我們想給一些建議。

【2】that改為which 考查定語從句。本句是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，先行詞是popular science books, 關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞在句中作主語。關(guān)系代詞that是不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句的。

【3】去掉the 考查冠詞。名詞nature自然，這是一個(gè)表示抽象含義的名詞，要單獨(dú)使用，不加冠詞。

【4】arousing改為arouse 考查并列成分。本句中動詞understand和arouse屬于并列結(jié)構(gòu)，都充當(dāng)us的補(bǔ)足語，所以都使用動詞原形。句意：他們幫助我們更好理解科學(xué)并激發(fā)我們對科學(xué)發(fā)現(xiàn)的好奇心。

【5】how改為why 考查表語從句連詞。根據(jù)前一句we read for fun and inspiration，是在解釋我推薦文學(xué)類書籍的原因。所以使用why引導(dǎo)表語從句，why表示原因，how表示方式，與上下文串聯(lián)不一致。

【6】writing改為written 考查分詞用法。動詞write與名詞these classic works構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，所以使用過去分詞短語在句中充當(dāng)后置定語。

【7】beautifully改為beautiful 考查形容詞。在英語中通常使用形容詞做定語修飾名詞；而副詞通常做狀語，不能修飾名詞。所以本句中使用形容詞beautiful修飾名詞language。

【8】It改為They 考查代詞。本句中代詞they指代前一句中的these classic works，在句中作主語，因?yàn)樵撛~是復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以用代詞they。

【9】us后面加with 考查固定搭配。動詞短語provide sb with sth提供某人某物，其中的介詞with是不能省略的。句意：他們不僅給我們快樂，還鼓勵我們批判性地思考。

【10】this改為it 考查固定句式。句式：I would appreciate this if......要是...我會感激不盡...。其中的it是不能省略的。

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