Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你被學校選為代表，將在送別美國交流生的歡送會上進行發(fā)言。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。

1. 回憶你們共同的經(jīng)歷；

2. 談?wù)勈斋@；

3. 表達祝愿。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear friends,

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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

How time flies. It has been two months since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us. During the past two months, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. I believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.

At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey home and hope that there will be more programs like this in the future.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】首先審題，要求作為學生代表在歡送會上發(fā)言，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。任務(wù)中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容1.回憶共同經(jīng)歷； 2.談?wù)勈斋@和感受； 3.表達祝愿。抓住了這些要點就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容。一定要注意發(fā)言稿的用語和格式。其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意: 1、提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當補充； 2、為使文章層次清楚，可分三個自然段寫：第一自然段回憶共同經(jīng)歷；第二自然段對自己的收獲和感受進行總結(jié)；第三自然段表示感謝。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【本文亮點】本篇書面表達要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: on behalf of代表， enable sb. to do sth.使某人做某事，promote our friendship促進我們的友誼，等等。還使用了定語從句During the past two months, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better.和賓語從句I believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。