【題目】根據(jù)以下所給的信息,介紹蘋果公司的最新產(chǎn)品蘋果智能手表。

產(chǎn)品名稱:蘋果牌智能手表

外形特點(diǎn):它被視為戴在手腕上的小型計(jì)算機(jī), 采用了藍(lán)寶石屏幕與Force Touch觸摸技術(shù),有銀色、金色、紅色和白色等多種顏色供選擇。

功能:可以發(fā)郵件、短信、支付網(wǎng)購(gòu)產(chǎn)品和導(dǎo)航;智能手表還可以監(jiān)控佩戴者的健康狀況和強(qiáng)壯程度。如果想使用智能手表的大部分功能,最好與iPhone同時(shí)使用。

價(jià)格:$349~$10,000

購(gòu)買信息:4月10號(hào)接受預(yù)定,4月24號(hào)在美國(guó)及其他8個(gè)國(guó)家出售。

參考詞匯:藍(lán)寶石屏幕 Sapphire screen 預(yù)定 pre-order 導(dǎo)航navigation services

【寫作要求】

只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章連貫。

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【答案】

Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from. At the touch of the screen, not only would you be able to send e-mails or messages, but also pay for online goods and enjoy the navigation services. In addition, this gadget (small device) can monitor the customer’s health and fitness. If you want to make the best of Apple Watch applications, you are recommended to own an iPhone. You can place an order for Apple Watch on April 10, which is expected to be put on the market in the United States and eight other countries on April 24, with prices between $349 and $10000.

【解析】

試題分析:本文屬于提綱類寫作,要求我們就題目中所給內(nèi)容寫一段作文。此篇文章中要點(diǎn)已給出,并且題目要求只能用五個(gè)句子完成寫作,于是不難觀察發(fā)現(xiàn)題目中所給出的要點(diǎn)也只有五條,所以可以針對(duì)每一條信息寫一句話,完成寫作。題中已經(jīng)將寫作中可能遇到的難詞羅列出來,在寫的時(shí)候可以直接套用。此寫作與其他提綱類寫作不同,限定了用5句話,所以不能像以往的寫作一樣擴(kuò)展太多。要注意在寫作的時(shí)候要讀懂題目中想要表達(dá)的意思,并且盡量不要讓句子太過復(fù)雜和繁瑣。另外寫作時(shí)切記需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可。同時(shí)在寫作時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯與高級(jí)的句型,不要遺漏任何的要點(diǎn),同時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞來連接整個(gè)文章,使文章更有條理性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,用了很多并列結(jié)構(gòu)以及從句將長(zhǎng)篇內(nèi)容概括成五個(gè)句子,例如第一句Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from,用一個(gè)長(zhǎng)復(fù)雜句將題中意思概括,為文章增色不少。

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