Question

4．來自英國的Tom，上周參加了當(dāng)?shù)啬陈眯猩缃M織的旅游服務(wù)，他很不滿意．所以，他想就此事給該旅行社寫一封投訴信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫信目的；2．不滿之處；3．表達(dá)期望．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于80；=2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear sir，
My name is Tom，who is a customer of your travel agency．_____________________________
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 本文為投訴信．
寫作要點為：1．寫信目的；2．不滿之處；3．表達(dá)期望．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Sir，
My name is Tom，who is a customer of your travel agency．Here I'm sorry to express my dissatisfaction with the service of your travel agency．
First of all，during the trip the tour guide not only introduced too many activities at our own expense but also took us to so many different places to do shopping，which occupied much time．Besides，I don't think the guide is competent enough because he had no good knowledge of t he scenic spots and was rude to us．What was worse，the food served was of poor quality and the accommodation conditions were awful．
Hopefully，you can take all the above into careful consideration and also take some measures to improve your service．
Yours sincerely，
Tom

點評 考生需熟悉書信格式．考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．