Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你是高三學(xué)生劉蕾，你的美國(guó)朋友David想了解中國(guó)高中生對(duì)音樂的認(rèn)識(shí)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，介紹你班同學(xué)對(duì)音樂的認(rèn)識(shí)情況，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.你班同學(xué)都喜歡音樂。

2.你班同學(xué)喜歡的音樂類型，不同同學(xué)有不同偏愛。

3.你班同學(xué)接觸音樂的主要方式。

4.你本人對(duì)音樂的看法。

Dear David，

With regard to your enquiry, I’d like to share our ideas of music with you.________________________________________________________________________

What’s your idea of music? Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David，

With regard to your enquiry, I’d like to share our ideas of music with you.

Generally speaking, almost everyone in our class is fond of music, and the preference to the style of music varies from person to person. Many students, we boys in particular, are crazy about pop music, the reason is that pop music can bring us not only joy but also motivation, while some girls consider classical music as their favorites, for they insist that classic music is more beautiful as well as relaxing. In our daily life, we do make full use of our spare time to listen to music as often as possible. We usually carry MP5 players to enjoy music downloaded from the net , which is a convenient way to access music almost everywhere. What’s more, we also appreciate inspiring music broadcast by our school and enjoy our favorite music on TV and in cell phones at home.

As far as I am concerned, it is music that benefits people both intellectually and emotionally. Listening to music is a good way to reduce stress and get one into high spirits. I believe a world without music would be very boring and colorless.

What’s your idea of music.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Liu Lei

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件，在寫作時(shí)要注意信件的格式，并從提綱內(nèi)容所列的四方面要點(diǎn)著手，因?yàn)樘崾拘畔⑤^少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。在寫作時(shí)盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，插入語以使文章層次分明，使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯亮點(diǎn)來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等。此外，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)現(xiàn)在情況的描述，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。