11.假如你是李華,你的朋友smith發(fā)來郵件說他即將從澳大利亞悉尼探親歸來,詢問是否需要從悉尼幫你買些東西,請給他回復一封電子郵件.要點如下:
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注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.文中不得透露考生本人所在學校及真實個人信息.
Dear Smith,
Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney.(高分句型一)Here I'd like to send my best regards to your parents.I'm sure you must have had a good time with your family.I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later.
It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me.(高分句型二)I'd appreciate it if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney.I believeI will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet.(高分句型三)I have also prepared a special gift for you.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華,你的朋友smith發(fā)來郵件說他即將從澳大利亞悉尼探親歸來,詢問是否需要從悉尼幫你買些東西,請給他回復一封電子郵件,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:向Smith的父母表示問候;表達謝意;希望購買的物品.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:send my best regards to向…致以良好的祝愿;have  a good time 過得愉快;being exposed to 暴露于;Look forward to盼望;
Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney.(高分句型一)
It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me.(高分句型二)
I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Smith,
        Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney.(高分句型一)Here I'd like to send my best regards to your parents.I'm sure you must have had a good time with your family.I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later.
        It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me.(高分句型二)I'd appreciate it if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney.I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet.(高分句型三)I have also prepared a special gift for you.
        Looking forward to seeing you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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