【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10 處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have been taken place in the school over the past three years.

In May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroys almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall building have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory buildings, and a library. There has also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happy and working hard. It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school, full of life.

Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that has brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if you unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.

【答案】

【解析】第一處：考查介詞的應(yīng)用。在具體到月日的日期名詞前，介詞用on。故In改為On。

第二處：考查語境及時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。a severe earthquake destroys almost everything in the school，句意：一場(chǎng)地震幾乎破壞了學(xué)校的每一處。可知此事發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。故destroys改為destroyed。

第三處：考查謂語動(dòng)詞與主語關(guān)系的應(yīng)用。 Tall building have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory buildings,謂語動(dòng)詞為have，則主語應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)，故building改為buildings。

第四處：考查系動(dòng)詞的應(yīng)用。There has also a newly-built standard playground.此句應(yīng)為There be句型。故has改為is。

第五處：考查副詞的應(yīng)用。In the new environment, teachers and students are living happy and working hard.后面的詞修飾動(dòng)詞living，應(yīng)用副詞。故happy改為happily。

第六處：考查形容詞的應(yīng)用。It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school,句子的主語不是人，所以后面的形容詞用ing形式。故amazed改為amazing。

第七處：考查冠詞的應(yīng)用。It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school,學(xué)校為一個(gè)，則應(yīng)有冠詞a。故在 beautiful前加a。

第八處：考查謂語動(dòng)詞的應(yīng)用。 It is love and concern that has brought about the great changes.此句的主語為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)與之對(duì)應(yīng)。故has改為have。

第九處：考查人稱代詞的應(yīng)用。 We can work wonders if you unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.后面的人稱應(yīng)與前面的對(duì)應(yīng)。故you改為we。

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