Question

18．成語（Chinese idioms）是中國文化的重要組成部分，它能用簡單的詞語表達出豐富并且深刻的意義．假定你是李華，你的外國筆友James對中國成語很感興趣，向你咨詢有關中國成語的信息，請你寫一份回信，包括如下內(nèi)容：
1．簡單介紹成語；
2．學習成語的益處；
3．分享自己學習成語的感受和體會；
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
 2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear James，
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms．
                                                               
I sincerely hope you can learn them well．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點文，寫作時，要點要齊全，包括：介紹，好處和感受．文章介紹成語，要用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；寫作要求寫感受，要以第一人稱為主．
重點短語和句型：
consisting of 包含，含有
appealing to 吸引
contributes to 對…有益
Chinese idioms，mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters，have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are an indispensable part of Chinese culture．
現(xiàn)在分詞consisting of作idioms的后置定語；because引導原因狀語從句．
with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life，a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese．
with+名詞+分詞構成短語，在句中作伴隨狀語．
Not only are they interesting，but also they tend to teach some wisdom，which helps me a lot．
not only…but also…連接并列句；which引導非限制性定語從句修飾句子內(nèi)容．

解答 Dear James，
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms．Chinese idioms，mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters，have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are an indispensable part of Chinese culture．（高分句型一）The benefits of learning them can be listed as follows．（介紹成語）
First，with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life，a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese．（高分句型二）Second，they usually possess vivid and profound meanings，making what you try to convey more convincing．（分析好處）
As far as I am concerned，I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms．Not only are they interesting，but also they tend to teach some wisdom，which helps me a lot．（高分句型三）（分享體會）
I sincerely hope you can learn them well．
                                                            Yours
                                                             Li Hua

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．