Question

【題目】書面表達

目前，學校存在少數(shù)學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬就此現(xiàn)象向中學生征文。標題是“My Opinion in Cheating in Examination”。請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：

主要原因考試偏多，偏難

不用功，懶惰

取悅父母、老師

個人看法作弊不對，違反校規(guī)

要誠實，努力學習

……（其他看法）

注意： 1.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要求，可適當發(fā)揮。

2. 短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)

3.字數(shù)不少于100字

4. 參考詞匯 ：作弊 cheat （v）勤奮diligent違反校規(guī) goes against the school rules 禁止forbid(forbidden過去分詞) 懲罰punish

My Opinion on Cheating in Examination

At present, some students have picked up a bad habit--- cheating in examination.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My opinion on Cheating in Examinations

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit—cheating in examination.

There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many examinations, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not diligent and they don’t work hard at their lessons. More time is wasted playing games on surfing the Internet. Therefore, they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams. Third, students have to do so to satisfy their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, cheating in exams should be forbidden because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students. “No pains, no gains.” We students are supposed to be honest and hardworking, only in this way, can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer fewer examinations and severely punish those who cheat in the examination.

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是要求寫一篇征文，介紹學校存在少數(shù)學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象，并闡述個人看法。文章給出了漢語提示。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：非限制性定語從句：……， some of which are too difficult. ；not only …but also 不僅 …而且because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students. 諺語：“No pains, no gains.”不勞無獲；部分倒裝：only in this way, can we improve our study and make progress.

2.使用了過渡詞語： First；Second；Therefore；Besides。

3.使用了重要短語：have picked up a bad habit養(yǎng)成壞習慣；prepare for the exams準備考試； are supposed to應(yīng)該； In my opinion在我看來。