Question

假如你是北侖中學(xué)學(xué)生李越，曾在英國學(xué)習(xí)三個月，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的英國老師Mr. Richard，但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請根據(jù)以下要點給你的英國同學(xué)Jack寫一封100─120個詞的信：

1. 感謝Jack對你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

2. 詢問Mr. Richard的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；

3. 邀請Jack在暑假期間來寧波做客。

注意：1. 信的抬頭、落款及信的第一句已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。

Aug. 1, 2012

Dear Jack,

Thanks for your kind help during my stay in Britain._________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Aug. 1, 2011

Dear Jack, 

Thanks for your kind help during my stay in Britain. With your help, I have made great progress in my English study.

How is Mr. Richard? I want to know something about his life. I tried to get in touch with him, but unfortunately I don’t have his address and can’t contact him. Do you have his email or his telephone number?

Would you like to visit Ningbo during the summer holidays? You see, Ningbo is a pretty tourist city, which is well-known for the mountains and lakes. I can show you around some places of interest in Ningbo. I am sure you will stay happily here and learn a lot of funny things.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best wishes!

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

【解析】本文是一封書信，考生已經(jīng)非常熟悉了，審題不存在任何問題。本文的要點基本上已經(jīng)給出，考生只需要適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮即可，在寫作的過程中切忌不要啰嗦，直接表達出所要表達的意思。注意使用高級句型和高級詞匯，不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語的結(jié)構(gòu)。