Question

【題目】

The Survey of Chinese Nationwide Bodybuilding Activities shows that there is an increase in the number of people who are participating in physical exercise.More than 40% of the Chinese people became frequent doers of body exercise in 2015，an increase of about 7% from 2008，according to the General Administration of Sport. Teenagers aged between 6 and 19 are the most enthusiastic participants of body exercise，compared to other age groups.Playground games are their No.1 choice，followed by others such as running，basketball and rope jumping.About 3 quarters of people aged over 20 take exercise during the evening hours.Jogging and running are the two most popular sports.

寫作內(nèi)容

1．用約 30 個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2．用約120個(gè)單詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)簡(jiǎn)要分析越來越多的人喜歡鍛煉的主要原因；

(2)根據(jù)你的分析，從社會(huì)和個(gè)人兩方面談?wù)勀銖倪@一現(xiàn)象中得到的啟示(不少于兩點(diǎn))。

寫作要求

1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3．不必寫標(biāo)題。

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Today，more and more people are playing an active role in various bodybuilding activities，and the young make up a large proportion.People of different ages choose different places for exercise.

There are some reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First of all，our government attaches great importance to bodybuilding activties and encourages people to get involved.It has launched many campaigns，aimed at promoting body building all over the country.So more and more people are willingly participating in taking exercise.In addition，the value in it is more widely recognized.

This phenomenon sets me thinking deeply.At the social level，with more and more people doing exercise，public health can be greatly improved，which will surely benefit the whole country.On a personal level，a healthy body is a powerful guarantee to improve the quality of life.Exercise can surely help you look good，feel good and keep fit.

【解析】試題分析：根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容，用約 30 個(gè)單詞概述文章信息的主要內(nèi)容，并用約120個(gè)單詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“越來越多的人喜歡鍛煉”這一現(xiàn)象的看法。根據(jù)所列出的要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是提綱式作文，采用三段式，內(nèi)容符合要求，語句精煉，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，使用高級(jí)句子。It has launched many campaigns，aimed at promoting body building all over the country.過去分詞做伴隨狀語；the value in it is more widely recognized.副詞的比較級(jí)和被動(dòng)語態(tài)完美結(jié)合；with more and more people doing exercise，ｗｉｔｈ的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)；public health can be greatly improved，which will surely benefit the whole country.ｗｈｉｃｈ引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Exercise can surely help you look good，feel good and keep fit.并列謂語恰到好處；另外，First of all，In addition，等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。