Question

11．假如你是高中學生李華，你校將在下月舉行一次英語演講比賽．請你根據(jù)以下要點給你校外籍教師William寫封短信，邀請他擔任比賽評委．信的主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．比賽時間、地點；
2．比賽主題：環(huán)保；
3．期待對方接受邀請．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear William，I'm writing to invite you to be a judge in the English speech contest to be held next month in our school．
Here is some specific information about the contest．First，it will be held in our lecture hall on August 3 at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd last for 3 hours．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．
I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．Please let me know as soon as possible so I can make arrangements．Looking forward to seeing you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信目的；二介紹比賽時間，地點和主題；三期待對方接受邀請．
高分句型：
1．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．句子里What's more表示"此外"；considering是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示"考慮到"；which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句；is intended for 表示"為了"．
此外，考慮到現(xiàn)在嚴重的環(huán)境污染和公眾對這個問題的忽視，所以這個比賽的主題被設置為"環(huán)境保護"；這是為了提高學生的環(huán)境意識．
2．I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．句子里it 做appreciate的形式賓語，代指if you could come．
如果你能來我會很感激的．

解答 One possible version
Dear William，
      I'm writing to invite you to be a judge in the English speech contest to be held next month in our school．
（點明書信目的）Here is some specific information about the contest．First，it will be held in our lecture hall on August 3 at 9：00 a．m．a(chǎn)nd last for 3 hours．What's more，considering the current severe environmental pollution and public ignorance of it，the theme of the contest has been set as"Environmental Protection"，which is intended for increasing students'environmental awareness．【高分句型一】（介紹比賽時間，地點和主題）
I'd appreciate it very much if you could come．【高分句型二】Please let me know as soon as possible so I can make arrangements．Looking forward to seeing you．（期待對方接受邀請）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
英語寫作是一個人英語綜合水平的體現(xiàn)．英語寫作水平的高低包含的要素很多，而句子構造方式是非常重要的要素．一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思．考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文．它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力．因此，要求考生在寫作過程中牢牢記住以下口訣："先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當心，前后呼應要一致，結構搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視"．學生在明確目的和掌握要領后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文．