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11．假設(shè)你是李華，你班同學(xué)在今天的英語課上就"高中生是否應(yīng)該在學(xué)校使用智能手機(jī)"進(jìn)行了課堂討論，同學(xué)們的觀點不一．請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，為本次課堂討論結(jié)果撰寫一篇英文報道稿，內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括：
1．活動簡介；2．支持理由；3．支持者理由；4．你的觀點．

支持者理由	聯(lián)系父母方便；上網(wǎng)便捷，有意學(xué)習(xí)
反對者理由	影響學(xué)習(xí)；手機(jī)游戲消磨意志

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Smart phones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students．Smart phones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students．Therefore，today in our English class a discussion was held about whether we senior school students should use our smart phones at school．Opinions are different．
Students who are in favor of it consider it convenient to contact their parents when necessary．Besides，they point out it is smart phones that give them access to the Internet and thus benefit their study．While others hold the opposite opinion．They find it easy for some students to be addicted to playing the smart phones，which has a negative effect on their studies．Worse still it can also discourage students'will．
Personally，as long as you can control yourself and use it properly，you can take it．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Therefore，today in our English class a discussion was held about whether we senior school students should use our smart phones at school．
本句使用了被動語態(tài)，更形象的表達(dá)了句子的意思，whether引導(dǎo)一個賓語從句，作介詞about的賓語．
高分句型二：
Students who arein favor of it consider it convenient to contact their parents when necessary．
本句包含一個who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞students，其中第二個it為形式賓語，convenient為形容詞作賓補，后面的不定式作真正的賓語．
高分句型三：
Besides，they point out it is smart phones thatgive them access to the Internet and thus benefit their study．
本句型包含一個賓語從句it is smart phones that give them access to the Internetand thus benefit their study，該賓語從句又使用了一個強調(diào)句型it is…that…，被強調(diào)的是句子的主語smart phones．動詞短語give sb access to sth給某人使用某事物的機(jī)會或者權(quán)力．

解答 Smart phones arebecoming more and more of a necessity for high school students．Therefore，today in our English class a discussion was held about whether we senior schoolstudents should use our smart phones at school．（高分句型一）Opinions are different．（引出話題）
       Students who arein favor of it consider it convenient to contact their parents when necessary．（高分句型二）Besides，they point out it is smart phones that give them access to theInternet and thus benefit their study．（高分句型三）While others hold the opposite opinion．They find it easy for some students to be addicted to playing the smart phones，which has a negative effect on their studies．Worse still it can alsodiscourage students'will．（闡述各自不同看法）
       Personally，aslong as you can control yourself and use it properly，you can take it．（個人觀點）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．